A Novel like Swiss Cheese: A Review of "From the Corner of His Eye"

And we're off... Dean Koontz has never been agiven the mark of great importance, such as
consistent writer. Sometimes his prose is good.Angel, seem somehow, remarkably, absent from
Sometimes it leaves a great deal to be desired.necessity, as if they could have been left out
Sometimes I get so involved in his intricatelycompletely, without real damage to the storyline.
woven plots that I forget the world I'm supposedThat is a mark of a carelessly told
to be living in. Sometimes I get so hung up on hisstory.Carelessly toldYes, in the end, "From the
repetitions (think: "sodium vapor lights"), that I amCorner of His Eye" is a carelessly told story.
time and again prematurely expelled from hisKoontz does just fine -- wonderful, in fact -- until
creation. But usually, writing style aside, Deanit's time to wrap it up. Until about page 480, I was
Koontz is a master of suspense, building tensionholding my breath, waiting for that breathtaking
to the breaking point, and then dropping theclimax that just had to be coming. It just had
bombshell.With this in mind, I had high hopes forto.Well, my friends, it never materialized.Koontz
"From the Corner of His Eye". At over fiveweaves and weaves until his story is so complex
hundred pages, it was a tome that I was sure Ithat you can't help but wonder what marvelous
could sink my teeth into. And surely, no matterending he has in store, and in this, he falls so far
the style, once I got into it, I knew I'd just beshort that the story goes from sixty to zero in a
holding my breath through to the conclusion....and Imatter of seconds.When the hero and the villain
was.And who are these characters you've setmeet -- and this time it is for the first and last
upon your stage? "From the Corner of His Eye" istime -- there should be fireworks. There should be
an ambitious work, even by Koontz standards. Heearthquakes (a la the twin uncles) and meteor
brings a multitude of characters to the page, bothstrikes and heaven and earth colliding.Instead,
likable and heinous, breathing life into them andthere is nothing...nothing, but an ending so
then setting them on their way.Characters in aanticlimactic that I wanted to take the book and
Koontz novel are always interesting. Very rarelydrop it into a hole in the earth."From the Corner
does he fall into the death trap of stereotypes,of His Eye" is nothing but self-indulgent mumbo
and "From the Corner of His Eye" doesn'tjumbo. Koontz took a wonderful concept (with
disappoint in this. Bartholomew and his nemesis,some interesting forays into advanced theoretical
Junior, though easily defined as "good" and,physics), built it up to critical mass, and then
accordingly, "evil," are both interesting characters,dumped an ocean full of water on it.There is no
with likes, dislikes, emotions, and idiosyncrasiesclimax to this novel. It goes straight from building
that set them apart.In fact, one of the highlightssuspension to denouement.Koontz may have
of "From the Corner of His Eye" is the runningwanted to indulge in a happy ending for once, and
commentary from Bartholomew's disaster-fearingthat's fine, but it seemed entirely too much effort
twin uncles. From train wrecks to tornadoes, fromfor naught.When I read a five hundred page
fires to firing squads, the twins have a horrornovel, I'm investing a great deal of time, energy,
story for all occasions. There was a satisfyingand emotional attachment into it. I don't like to be
cohesiveness to the thread the twins brought todisappointed, and "From the Corner of His Eye"
the story, and they even brought much-neededwas a monumental disappointment on all levels. If
comic relief.Oh what a tangled web... The troubleI knew at page 1 what I knew at page 500, I
-- oh, and there is trouble -- starts with thenever would have given this novel the time of
plotline. Inevitably, when an author's plotlines getday.If you're a sucker for a happy ending, then
complex, they are going to get tangled. I can livemaybe that's enough to make up for the Swiss
with that. But when ends are left loose, storiescheese-like plot holes, but beware: the ending may
unravel accordingly, and such is the case withbe happy, but it's so sappy happy that you'd
"From the Corner of His Eye". Characters whobetter not forget your bucket.Lisa is an author on
seem somehow potentially relevant are left towhich is a site for Poetry.
fade away from neglect. Characters that are